Sunday 7 March 2010

sukhara arapate..............

He sukha!!

Tuma biswasare aau
bandee karaono mote,

abhaabara aan bhitare
bhari abujha mor
bhoka aau bheka,,
 
mana tala saru andhaara tale
sansara bandhichhi dukha.

ki sahase aba  badhi  neba kuha!!!

nija sathe salis kari kari
jhaaunli galani je deha.
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9 comments:

  1. Dibyanshi24 March 2010 at 06:56

    good one.. bahut bhala lagila didi kabita ti...


    www.eodissa.com

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  2. Soumya12 May 2010 at 03:20

    wow......its awesome...........

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  3. Bibhu29 July 2010 at 18:31

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  4. Bibhu29 July 2010 at 18:34

    sabu kabita gudika bhala lagila..happy to see Odia Kabita in a blog..never thought Odia kabita can look good in a blog with roman alphabets..Looking forward to see more kabita here.

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  5. debendra lal15 September 2010 at 00:53

    khub bhala lekhuchhanti. amiti ahuri ahuri lekhantu.

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  6. debendra lal15 September 2010 at 01:04

    PRASHNA
    jeebana pacharuchhi mote
    mote sabu dina-
    babure!
    tu ka'na mote
    niti bujhi hin chalichhu?

    hele,
    mor ka'na uttariba
    thik heba ho pathake!

    -'han'na 'nahin'?

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  7. SARAJU NAYAK, SURAT20 October 2010 at 09:04

    very good. keep it up.

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  8. kreativemachinez31 March 2011 at 00:31

    Hi Really Beautiful. Can I know U?

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  9. kumar amiya26 March 2012 at 04:16

    he sukha tume asana kebe garibara a vanga hrudaya tire,
    swagat kariparibini tumaku mora a fungula sankirna ghare,tume pherija a bada lokira sehi amuha deulaku
    jeunthiki jibanata mapa hauthiba swartha re swartha re

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